She closes her eyes. The smell of seaweed fills her nostrils, gentle waves lap against her feet, she tastes salt as she moistens her lips and feels the sun warming her golden skin.
She's never felt so alive. Salty tears return to the ocean as she let's go of life and surrenders to the sea.
Flash Fiction - Every Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss - If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.
Happy reading and writing!
Love
KB
xxx
Excellent as always!
ReplyDeleteKB...You are such a talent!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting and playing this week. You've been missed..
Have a Great Week-End...Galen
Geeyah! Did she just do what I think she just did??
ReplyDeleteOh man... say it ain't so!
the see is a scary place...nice but creepy 55, kb lol i'm not up...i've got nothing right now. too tired.
ReplyDeleteyou have a real talent for creating a scene and portraying emotion. This is truly a complete story in 55 words.
ReplyDeleteOh, tell me she didn't walk into the sea! How sad, but you told all the emotion in 55 words. Great stuff!
ReplyDeleteSummer escape turned Life escape!
ReplyDeleteWhat a pity!
Maybe that is how alive one feels just before one dies!
Thanks Mr Snake.
ReplyDeleteI missed you guys too G.
She certainly did Mojo.
How dare you sleep C, hehe.
Aww thanks Toadee.
Ake, she did indeed.
Moana - we will find out one day.