Thursday, 20 August 2009

FLASH 55 - TWO FOR THE PRICE OF ONE

Hubby's 55 - Los Angeles Airport




This Flash 55 is a follow on from last week's wee effort. I'm taking Eaton's advice.


The Air States AX370 crew arrived at the briefing office ten minutes ahead of schedule. They had already heard about tropical cyclone “Felicia” from the inbound crew. A high intensity storm, the epicenter lay 740nm ENE of Oahu, 140nm north of the Tropic of Cancer.
“Hmm, ‘Fellatio’, the big blow" mused the First Officer aloud.




KB's 55


His mind is full of the memory of her. The pounding of her heart as he rests his head on her breast, her intoxicating scent beneath sweet perfume and silky skin welcoming his fingertips.

"I'll return at nightfall my love," she whispers.

His restlessness increases as he awaits sunset.

Being a vampire in love sucks!



Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I (and sometimes hubby) compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -
G-MAN
If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.
Happy reading and writing!
Love KB
XXXX

15 comments:

buffalodick said...

Both very good, in very different ways!

Nazish Rahman said...

Nice...so when r u planning to publish them in your book...lol!!

Missy said...

Great experiences with both. I can't imagine flying over a hurricane or during one eek. Karen woot, I bet it would suck to be a vampire :)

Nice 55's

Susan at Stony River said...

Love that tone switch in the vampire-in-love's last line! ROFL, beautiful!

G-Man said...

You both got this Oral thing going on today eh?
Very Juicy 55's!!
Thank You both for these marvelous contributions.
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G

Marja said...

Just visiting to read your both great 55's I love your vampire end'
KB

Anonymous said...

Love the vampire twist and other play on words. Clever and fun.

You can read mine here.

Have a great weekend.

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Hootin' Anni said...

LOVE the vampire 55!!!

My 55 is posted here. Have a super weekend. See you next week, I hope.

Dr.John said...

Loved the surprise ending." Love sucks"- Funny

my 55 is posted
HERE.

Jadey said...

The big blow what a hoot. Great 55's KB your 55 I can't wait to read more of gotta love a vampire in love. TGIF mine are up too

ciara said...

loved them both. but ugh hurricanes and such are not fun. hey, i had a vampire 55 once when i was slightly obsessed w twilight for a short time lol great job to both you and your hubs! :) i'm up as well.

Mona said...

Lol! Now I am wondering what would be a female name rhyming with cunnilingus!

buffalodick said...

Hope I didn't offend you with the joke, I thought you'd laugh...

KB said...

Thanks for all your comments.

Buff - loved the joke!

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