Friday, 30 April 2010

FLASH 55 - OUR SPECIAL PLACE

What is love?
I cannot say
I feel it more
every day

A kiss, a cuddle
A simple word
The joy I feel
Is quite absurd

Summer rain
Brings tears of joy
Dreams of children
A girl or boy?

My wish to bring
A smile to your face
Our love combined
A special place


Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss G-MAN. If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.

Happy reading and writing!
Love KB
XXX

18 comments:

Toadee said...

oh damn, I've read this already :)
lovely poetry and a lovely sentiment x

Maha said...

Aww that was really sweet. It left me stupidly smiling :)

g-man said...

Karen...
You are so mushy and giddy, that makes me very happy.
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Whitesnake is a very lucky man.
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Brian Miller said...

now that is one special 55...aint love beautiful...

my 55 is up!

Jingle said...

unique 55,
love is magical!
love your 55.

mine is up.

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

I love seeing people so in love.
You guys are great for each other!
Mine is here
I have three 55 to offer.
Hope you like them.
Have you a blessed weekend!
hugs
shakira

Whitesnake said...

aww babe...ty for this and I love you to.....xxxx

anthonynorth said...

A lovely 55 from you today.

John's comments said...

oops wrong link. Gulp. Mine is the before or after. See what I mean here.

Hootin' Anni said...

'dreams of children'...is this something we should really pay attention to? Are you trying to tell us something?

Excellent poetry...it flows so well.

Mine this week is DOUBLE STANDARD As always, scroll down a bit, below my Friday's Show n Tell.

Have a super weekend fellow 55'r!!

Monkey Man said...

That was really nice. Sweet, as Maha said. Left me smiling as well. My 55 is HERE.

PattiKen said...

This is really lovely. It brings a nice warm fuzzy feeling.

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, for that kind of love. Beautiful post.

KB said...

Glad you enjoyed my poem. I thought it was kinda cute and left me smiling too x

Leslie said...

Sweet in 55 but I know if you had 5000 it would be just as sweet and wonderful - enjoy the love!!!

Moondustwriter

KB said...

Leslie - Glad you enjoyed it.

Jingle said...

http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/jingles-may-followers-award.html

some May awards,
Happy Sunday!

KB said...

Jingle - On my way.

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