Thursday, 26 August 2010

Poetry: Message In A Bottle

Here's my contribution to One Shot Wednesday.

Photo Source: Pixabay



Message in a bottle
Swept away by the sea
Secrets held within
Dreams of you and me



Message in a bottle
Tossed to and fro
Emotions hidden inside
Ensnared, nowhere to go



Message in a bottle
Washed up on the shore
Waiting to be found
Love lost no more



Message in a bottle
Read and set free
Never to be trapped again
Our dreams of you and me
 
 
 

Coming up...Walkabout Wednesday


Have a good one.
 
Love KB
xxx





11 comments:

Nessa said...

Very romantic.

dustus said...

I always seem to enjoy storys that include the message in a bottle idea and I like the way you rhyme it into your poem.

Cor said...

Welcome to One Shot Wednesday! Great poem, I really liked your use of imagery. I also liked your romantic spin to a simple message in a bottle. Keep up the great work!

nomorewining said...

I got a big message in a bottle once, in fact, too many bottles. Red wine bottles, white wine bottles, scotch bottles. I discovered that I was hooked on bottles. I never wrote about them though - just drank everything they had in them. One day I finally got the message - stay away from the bottles. Now I write.
Good luck to you and keep up the writing - it's great stuff!

moondustwriter said...

glad your bottle was dreams and not the agony and pain of the other commenter

lovely and sweet my friend

thanks for shooting it over to One Shot

Love from the Moon

Whitesnake said...

Don't ya just love writing babe?
xxxx

Tear Drop said...

I'm glad your bottle was uncorked. Tender poem with a happy ending. Doesn't get much better.

Now all you need is a Genie in a bottle to go along with that.

Beachanny said...

yes, Sting's song played background while I read it. Nice wordplay and lovely love poem. So good to see so many men writing love poems this week. Thank you.

Pete Marshall said...

a great piece that had me asking what the message could be!!! thanks for sharing with one shot..pete

Amanda said...

Loved it...also wrote about a message in a bottle some time ago...wonder what was inside yours (Smile)...I loved the last stanza...it says so much!! Thanks for visiting me and I certainly will be back. Wishing you a happy day and lots of hugs xx Keep writing...it's awesome!! xx

KB said...

Thank you so much for your comments.

Lots of Love to Whitesnake xxxx

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