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Monday 3 December 2018

Poetry: MISSING YOU

As I was perusing my favourite blogs earlier, I noticed a challenge over at real toads to write a flash 55 to keep the memory of our dear friend Galen alive. Galen originally hosted this fun challenge and his posts and comments made me laugh so much. I decided to repost this 55 which I wrote over ten years ago and if you read the comments you will see G-Man being his amusing self. If I remember correctly, his 55 was regarding toilet humour that week. Miss you buddy.

P.S. This poem was written about my husband. We met, he went back to Australia, he came back, we got married...it's complicated, hehe.


When you're away my life feels wrong.
My only company wine and song.
I count down the days until you return.
The art of patience, something to learn.

When we're together the time flies.
Love and laughter, mischief in our eyes.
Nobody understands me, like you do.
Sometimes I believe we are one, not two.

Photo source: Pixabay 

FROM ORIGINAL POST  19/9/2008

Flash Fiction - Every Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -
If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.

Happy reading and writing!
Love
KB
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25 comments:

  1. Pam19 September 2008 at 14:52

    great 55, kb...nice poem :) yahtzee! btw LOL

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  2. G-Man19 September 2008 at 17:06

    A lovely and personal little poem/story....I loved this Karen!!!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End...G

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  3. KB19 September 2008 at 17:37

    Ciara - You're fast tonight girl.

    G - I can't help myself, have to add a poem to my 55's every now and then. Glad you like it G. I hope you washed your hands before you commented. Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :)

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  4. Mona19 September 2008 at 19:01

    O what a beautiful poem this is Karen! I love it!

    "The art if patience, something to learn" I love that line! How true!

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  5. KB19 September 2008 at 19:28

    Thanks Mona. Means so much coming from you - oh wise and talented one.

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  6. Steve19 September 2008 at 21:19

    Hey this is really great, well done girl.....very well done!

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  7. KB19 September 2008 at 21:29

    Thanks Steve.

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  8. Akelamalu20 September 2008 at 04:01

    What a lovely poem KB and a great 55!

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  9. G-Man20 September 2008 at 13:38

    Don't you worry about my hands. I'm a very clean bloke!!!!

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  10. KB20 September 2008 at 14:18

    Thanks for the comments guys.

    Missy - I presume you have read his 55 by now and know what he has been up to.

    G - Good to know.

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  11. Kerry O'Connor3 December 2018 at 21:07

    I miss Galen too. Lovely to read his commentary here. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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  12. kaykuala3 December 2018 at 22:08

    G-Man's comments brought back pleasant memories. KB! Hank finds a connection with him whenever a 55' is written these days!

    Hank

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  13. brudberg3 December 2018 at 22:16

    A lovely tribute to Galen... I only got into the tail end of his kick ass weekends.

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  14. Bob Bushell3 December 2018 at 22:52

    Brilliant poem KB.

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  15. DIMI3 December 2018 at 22:55

    Hello KB!
    An excellent poem! Love the beautiful lyrics!
    You are so talented! Have a happy December and a lovely week!
    Dimi...

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  16. Carol @Comfort Spring Station3 December 2018 at 23:20

    Lovely!

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  17. Jim4 December 2018 at 01:08

    "we are one not two," it happens. More and more so as time goes on. Then if there is a split it all reverts to wine and song again. Been there, 13 years first marriage, three W&S (post Hippie days, I grew my hair out and got a motorcycle to augment my VW Bug), now going on 46 years second marriage.
    I love your words, I have lived them too. Thank you, KB.
    ..

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  18. Debbie4 December 2018 at 04:02

    a pretty, heartfelt poem!!!

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  19. Magaly Guerrero4 December 2018 at 06:08

    I really like the tone and rhythm of the poem. The seemingly simple way in which it explores a topic that isn't simple at all.

    And I completely understand...

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  20. Bill4 December 2018 at 07:48

    KB, your heart speaks beautiful words!

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  21. Sharon Wagner4 December 2018 at 10:38

    I love the poem. I drink too much wine when I'm alone, away from the husband. Thanks for your blog visit!

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  22. Vivian Zems4 December 2018 at 13:08

    To quote the good book.." and the two shall become one flesh". You are in sync! Love this.

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  23. Susie Clevenger4 December 2018 at 14:17

    Love is a beautiful thing.

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  24. Lady Fi4 December 2018 at 19:01

    Lovely!

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  25. italiafinlandia4 December 2018 at 22:13

    Very sweet... I quite like the last line!

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