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Saturday, 6 April 2019

Poetry: Consequences



Post bumped up to share with with Tuesday Platform Originally posted 4/5/2011


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Twisting turmoil


emotions run amok

feelings laid out

like an open book



Nowhere to run

nowhere to hide

some secrets should

remain inside



The prison consumes

time to break free

nobody to lean on

I must depend on me





The heart is willing

the time is now

a little faith

takes care of the how




Have a great weekend
Love KB
xxx



27 comments:

Brian Miller said...

a little faith will carry you far KB

Claudia said...

yes - i agree with brian...a little faith can work wonders when we get stuck somewhere..

anthonynorth said...

That faith is so important.

Katherine said...

Faith is what is required to take care of that feeling of turmoil & hopelessness... a wonderful poem KB :) Have a great day!

janice said...

one needs to depend on themselves...and yet in order to do so one needs faith...a beautifully and gently written poem which says so much about what one needs to survive and rhymes ever so sweetly...lovely write...

dustus said...

Great how the poem seems to build with urgency to that great last stanza "The heart is willing / the time is now / a little faith / takes care of the how" smooth!

Belinda Munoz said...

Nice rhyming and a great testament to the power of faith.

ayala said...

Faith at times is all we need-nicely done!

Anonymous said...

Nice write.

Whitesnake said...

Beautiful babe xxxx

PattiKen said...

I like this a lot, KB. Just make sure some of that faith is in yourself.

Missy said...

Faith gives you the strength to keep on because soon that faith will remind you, things pass and life moves on. Love you Karen. ((hugs))

Anonymous said...

Oh absolutely!! Faith and a little bit of love (self) go a long way in keep us on our feet! Very nicely written, my friend..

Christine said...

Well said!

Nancy Chan said...

Sometimes all it needs is a little faith. Happy weekend!

Julia said...

A poignant poem. I think everyone has felt a bit of what this poem describes at one point in their life.
Have a happy weekend.
Hugs, Julia

bill burke said...

Faith can help us through any situation. A well written poem, I like it!

Marja said...

Good one well written

Tanza Erlambang said...

lovely poem...
have a great day

Ela said...

Beautiful poem !
Greetings

Whitesnake said...

If I had my way i would marry you! Oh bugga I did!

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Very positive!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Yes, a very positive message.

Sanaa Rizvi said...

Wonderfully uplifting!

Susie Clevenger said...

We need the reminder to have faith in ourselves.

The Real Cie said...

Parts of this sound like depressed me regretting what hypomanic me has done.

Nora said...

Wonderful verse and I hope you are having a wonderful Easter also.

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