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Saturday, 6 April 2019

Poetry: Consequences



Post bumped up to share with with Tuesday Platform Originally posted 4/5/2011


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Twisting turmoil


emotions run amok

feelings laid out

like an open book



Nowhere to run

nowhere to hide

some secrets should

remain inside



The prison consumes

time to break free

nobody to lean on

I must depend on me





The heart is willing

the time is now

a little faith

takes care of the how




Have a great weekend
Love KB
xxx



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25 comments:

  1. Brian Miller4 May 2011 at 09:08

    a little faith will carry you far KB

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  2. Claudia4 May 2011 at 09:17

    yes - i agree with brian...a little faith can work wonders when we get stuck somewhere..

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  3. anthonynorth4 May 2011 at 09:21

    That faith is so important.

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  4. Katherine4 May 2011 at 09:58

    Faith is what is required to take care of that feeling of turmoil & hopelessness... a wonderful poem KB :) Have a great day!

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  5. Anonymous4 May 2011 at 10:09

    one needs to depend on themselves...and yet in order to do so one needs faith...a beautifully and gently written poem which says so much about what one needs to survive and rhymes ever so sweetly...lovely write...

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  6. dustus4 May 2011 at 11:28

    Great how the poem seems to build with urgency to that great last stanza "The heart is willing / the time is now / a little faith / takes care of the how" smooth!

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  7. Belinda Munoz4 May 2011 at 11:31

    Nice rhyming and a great testament to the power of faith.

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  8. ayala4 May 2011 at 11:48

    Faith at times is all we need-nicely done!

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  9. Anonymous4 May 2011 at 13:09

    Nice write.

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  10. Whitesnake4 May 2011 at 14:40

    Beautiful babe xxxx

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  11. PattiKen4 May 2011 at 14:52

    I like this a lot, KB. Just make sure some of that faith is in yourself.

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  12. Anonymous5 May 2011 at 08:55

    Oh absolutely!! Faith and a little bit of love (self) go a long way in keep us on our feet! Very nicely written, my friend..

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  13. Christine6 April 2019 at 15:40

    Well said!

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  14. Nancy Chan6 April 2019 at 19:44

    Sometimes all it needs is a little faith. Happy weekend!

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  15. Julia7 April 2019 at 00:11

    A poignant poem. I think everyone has felt a bit of what this poem describes at one point in their life.
    Have a happy weekend.
    Hugs, Julia

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  16. Bill7 April 2019 at 02:46

    Faith can help us through any situation. A well written poem, I like it!

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  17. Marja7 April 2019 at 16:50

    Good one well written

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  18. Tanza Erlambang7 April 2019 at 23:27

    lovely poem...
    have a great day

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  19. Ela8 April 2019 at 01:23

    Beautiful poem !
    Greetings

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  20. Whitesnake10 April 2019 at 15:55

    If I had my way i would marry you! Oh bugga I did!

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  21. Rosemary Nissen-Wade10 April 2019 at 16:57

    Very positive!

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  22. Sherry Blue Sky10 April 2019 at 17:01

    Yes, a very positive message.

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  23. Sanaa Rizvi10 April 2019 at 18:58

    Wonderfully uplifting!

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  24. Susie Clevenger11 April 2019 at 06:49

    We need the reminder to have faith in ourselves.

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  25. Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost 11 April 2019 at 07:21

    Parts of this sound like depressed me regretting what hypomanic me has done.

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