An uninvited visitor shelters from the storm
I announce my arrival to each and every room
He scurries to darkened corners
I've been told he's more afraid of me than I am of him
Each time I see him
I run squealing from the room
How can this be?
He's just a tiny, little mouse
Flash Fiction - Each Friday a group of us each compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you want to join in the fun and games...post your story, report to the boss - to let him know. If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read what the others have posted. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.
Happy reading and writing!
Love
KB
xxx
great 55! i don't like mice *shivers* LOL
ReplyDeleteI saw him in the garage earlier. I don't want to kill him but what if he invites all his friends and family over?
ReplyDeleteWhat to do, what to do!
eeekkk - I don't like rodents! I'm guessing he has already sent for his friends and family. Get a hungry cat. ;-)
ReplyDeleteI already have a cat. I think I should fire him!
ReplyDeleteLOL! I should have known! This is such a cute 55ve Kb! I love it!
ReplyDeleteMice make us all react in that manner :D
I'm up too!
Glad you likey Mona. I'm on my way to visit with you.
ReplyDeleteAww.. mice are cute. Our neighborhood had some new construction going on, and some mice lost their home, so they took up residence under ours. And they found a way in from under the kitchen cabinets, somehow. I thought they were adorable 'til I accidentally baked one. Oooh... maybe that's a 55 waiting to be written...
ReplyDeleteThey really are more afraid of you. Think how scared you are, and then imagine what that means in terms of the poor mouse, and you'll stop being afraid and start feeling sorry for him.
Great 55!
-smarmoofus
You baked a mouse? 55 for sure
ReplyDeleteGood morning KB! I saw your comment on my blog about you following G-Man's instruction to go to the previous commenter's blog to read their 55 and I wanted to say sorry that you came over and I didn't have one up. I can talk the stars out of the sky but I am absolutely terrible putting words down on paper or in this situation on the screen..lol. I do appreciate you stopping by and hope to see you again. Maybe during the week I will work on a 55 for next Friday because I have never participated in it.
ReplyDeleteThanks again and have a beautiful day! :)
COME ON........are you a woman or a mouse..................????
ReplyDeleteOk.......here's the cheese!
I thought 'spider', bah I'm not afraid of spiders! Then you said 'MOUSE' - EEEEEEKKKKKKK!
ReplyDeleteYou got me with that 55!
Breazy - Give it a try, once you start...you become hooked!
ReplyDeleteWS - I luuuuuuvvvvvvvvv cheese
Ake - hehe, I don't mind spiders either
He may be tiny but he's watching you............
ReplyDeleteThanks for that comforting thought
ReplyDeleteeek!
Glad you likey Missy x
ReplyDeleteCute! I love mice, actually. I'm amazed that anyone runs from them.
ReplyDelete` I have an idea - feed the mouse something that's been dipped in catnip oil!
P.S. plenty of photos moving down my blog now that I've been away for a while. Ack!!
I'm on way for a look See
ReplyDeleteYou got me there. Great 55 Oh and get a cat that helps
ReplyDeleteI have a cat!
ReplyDeleteyou shame me with you creativity my friend. Send your friend over I will give him a good home
ReplyDeleteWelcome home Toadee and thanks for the kind words
ReplyDeleteWonderful posting
ReplyDeleteThanks Erik
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