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Thursday, 7 May 2009

FLASH 55 - BEHIND CLOSED DOORS

Tears fall. The door closes behind her. Change takes commitment. Old habits resurface in an instant. A long corridor beckons. What lurks behind the many doors? Footsteps echo sweet promises made. The warmth of the handle beneath her grasp lures her. She releases it, walking bravely down her chosen path. Some doors should remain closed.



Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -
If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.

Happy reading and writing!
Love KB
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15 comments:

  1. Hubby7 May 2009 at 21:20

    Awsesome 55, Babe. I know exactly where this is coming from. I love you, and am proud of your efforts. XXX

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  2. G-Man7 May 2009 at 23:32

    Karen, quite a thoughtful 55.
    I'm sure we have all been faced with those choices at time or another. Your NZ excuse is accepted my dear...
    Have a Great Week-End....G

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  3. KB8 May 2009 at 19:13

    Hubby - Thanks for understanding xx

    G - Thanks for accepting my excuse.

    Missy - How do you always totally get where I am coming from? You are in my head girl xx

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  4. anthonynorth8 May 2009 at 20:41

    Yes, sometimes maybe they should. A deep 55. Nicely done.

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  5. Mona8 May 2009 at 22:08

    A step forward is Growth. A step behind is cowardice.

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  6. Hootin Anni8 May 2009 at 22:19

    Excellent.....but now you have me wondering just what is behind the closed doors!!!

    My 55 is posted now. Either you can use the direct link at the top of my Friday post or scroll down below the Friday's show n tell photos. Have a super day.

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  7. Dr.John8 May 2009 at 22:34

    Great , thoughtful 55.
    One never knows which doors not to open.
    Mine is posted ( another door?)

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  8. KB8 May 2009 at 22:56

    Ant - Thanks for stopping by.

    Mona - Ain't that the truth.

    Anni - Nothing wrong with wondering.

    DR J - I've already opened the door to your 55. Eek, well I thought I did.

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  9. Fandango9 May 2009 at 00:24

    We dragons ignore doors. They are an inconvenience. Always wondering if we one should have opened it or not.
    No there are monsters behind the doors.
    We posted.

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  10. Lulda Casadaga9 May 2009 at 00:46

    And what's behind door #1 or #2 or #3? I'll choose door #2! I like the number two and your 55!! :)

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  11. paisley9 May 2009 at 02:43

    nice 55,,, i am so glad we don't have to do that,, pick a door i mean......

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  12. Pam9 May 2009 at 03:14

    some doors should remain closed-oh i know that's right! great 55 as usual, kb :)

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  13. Head Cookie9 May 2009 at 09:50

    Very nicely done KB. I hope you have a fantastic Mother's Day. My 55 is up.

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  14. Donnetta10 May 2009 at 15:37

    Good thought, KB. Some doors are just best left alone. Don't even knock! Good to see you. D

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  15. KB11 May 2009 at 12:20

    Thanks for stopping by everyone :)

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