Pleasantly exhausted from a long day at the zoo, Rebbecca gazed wistfully at the children playing.
"We missed so much," said Jack.
Rebbecca was surprised he had read her thoughts so well. They had been unable to have children of their own.
"'Such a shame we didn't have time to see the giraffes," added Jack.
Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -
If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.
Happy reading and writing!
Love KB
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Missy - You do make me giggle girl. One week you're telling me it's almost time for the menopause and the next you're telling me it's not too late to have kids.
ReplyDeleteNice to see u back....well would love to join but u see was never good in writing a story...lol!!! Thats a nice exercise u follow "KB"...is this your name??
ReplyDeleteTake Care
Ah, differing perspectives. A good one.
ReplyDeleteHi Karen...
ReplyDeleteThanks for playing this week.
Excellent 55.
Still celebrating my kids wedding!
See you next week....G
Nice little story That would be hard to deal with if you haven't children of your own. Have a nice day Is it that grey and cloudy over there as well.
ReplyDeleteNazish - Why don't you give writing a story a try
ReplyDeleteAnt - Thanks
G - You enjoy every minute of it
Marja - It's sunny but cold here