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Wednesday, 24 June 2009

CARRY ON TUESDAY #6

You would have understood me, had you waited
Would have loved me instead of hated
Your words cut deep and hurt me
Misrepresented and dirty

A mystery still unfolding
Begrudging instead of holding
Let loose on a sea of hate
Bide your time and commiserate

Battles fought, still raging on
Lovers distraught, mind has gone
You could have loved me, had you waited
Destiny and fate untranslated
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12 comments:

  1. KB24 June 2009 at 17:05

    Thanks hun x

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  2. NR24 June 2009 at 19:00

    KB u rock....believe me i love the way u write..excellent!!!!
    Wonder from where u get inspiration to write so well..!!

    take care!!!

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  3. KB24 June 2009 at 19:30

    Thanks Nazish. Take care of that arm :)

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  4. keith24 June 2009 at 20:44

    Wow Karen, that told him!! What a great poem. Thanks for joining in x

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  5. KB24 June 2009 at 20:48

    Thanks so much Keith and don't worry, it's not about you. LOL x

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  6. buffalodick25 June 2009 at 01:30

    Nice poem... all I know is dirty Limericks... :)

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  7. G-Man25 June 2009 at 08:29

    Perky..Perfect...and Poetic...KB

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  8. keith25 June 2009 at 09:09

    ...actually your poem is very much along the lines of what a certain young lady said to me the other day - hence my rather agressive open letter to her.

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  9. Marja25 June 2009 at 16:25

    Wow great poem You've got it miss

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  10. KB26 June 2009 at 06:50

    Buff - Do tell...

    G - A bit like me?

    Keith - Spooky. Take care of you x

    Thanks Miss Marja.

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  11. Tumblewords:27 June 2009 at 16:58

    Well written - it only takes a bit of listening, doesn't it? Nice work.

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  12. KB27 June 2009 at 17:13

    Tumblewords - Yes indeed.

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