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Friday, 30 April 2010

FLASH 55 - OUR SPECIAL PLACE

What is love?
I cannot say
I feel it more
every day

A kiss, a cuddle
A simple word
The joy I feel
Is quite absurd

Summer rain
Brings tears of joy
Dreams of children
A girl or boy?

My wish to bring
A smile to your face
Our love combined
A special place


Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss G-MAN. If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.

Happy reading and writing!
Love KB
XXX
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18 comments:

  1. Toadee30 April 2010 at 08:48

    oh damn, I've read this already :)
    lovely poetry and a lovely sentiment x

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  2. Maha30 April 2010 at 12:54

    Aww that was really sweet. It left me stupidly smiling :)

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  3. g-man30 April 2010 at 13:26

    Karen...
    You are so mushy and giddy, that makes me very happy.
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Whitesnake is a very lucky man.
    Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  4. Brian Miller30 April 2010 at 13:28

    now that is one special 55...aint love beautiful...

    my 55 is up!

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall30 April 2010 at 15:23

    unique 55,
    love is magical!
    love your 55.

    mine is up.

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  6. Unknown30 April 2010 at 18:23

    I love seeing people so in love.
    You guys are great for each other!
    Mine is here
    I have three 55 to offer.
    Hope you like them.
    Have you a blessed weekend!
    hugs
    shakira

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  7. Whitesnake30 April 2010 at 19:06

    aww babe...ty for this and I love you to.....xxxx

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  8. anthonynorth30 April 2010 at 19:39

    A lovely 55 from you today.

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  9. John (@bookdreamer)30 April 2010 at 22:30

    oops wrong link. Gulp. Mine is the before or after. See what I mean here.

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  10. Hootin Anni30 April 2010 at 22:38

    'dreams of children'...is this something we should really pay attention to? Are you trying to tell us something?

    Excellent poetry...it flows so well.

    Mine this week is DOUBLE STANDARD As always, scroll down a bit, below my Friday's Show n Tell.

    Have a super weekend fellow 55'r!!

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  11. Monkey Man1 May 2010 at 08:54

    That was really nice. Sweet, as Maha said. Left me smiling as well. My 55 is HERE.

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  12. PattiKen1 May 2010 at 13:03

    This is really lovely. It brings a nice warm fuzzy feeling.

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  13. SandyCarlson1 May 2010 at 13:43

    Oh, for that kind of love. Beautiful post.

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  14. KB1 May 2010 at 17:24

    Glad you enjoyed my poem. I thought it was kinda cute and left me smiling too x

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  15. moondustwriter2 May 2010 at 08:25

    Sweet in 55 but I know if you had 5000 it would be just as sweet and wonderful - enjoy the love!!!

    Moondustwriter

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  16. KB2 May 2010 at 17:21

    Leslie - Glad you enjoyed it.

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  17. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall3 May 2010 at 07:20

    http://itistimetothinkformyself.blogspot.com/2010/05/jingles-may-followers-award.html

    some May awards,
    Happy Sunday!

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  18. KB3 May 2010 at 15:06

    Jingle - On my way.

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