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Saturday 24 November 2018

Poetry: Together

A poem for my husband (Whitesnake) on his birthday. 





Dreams of you
and me together.
Souls entwined,
for now and ever.

Candles lit,
music playing.
Red wine flowing,
bodies swaying.

Probing tongues,
exploring mouths.
Hands and fingers,
heading south.

Clothes are falling,
skin exposed.
Senses awakening,
from head to toes.

Lost in each other,
bodies entwined.
I am yours,
you are mine.


I remember writing this during a period of my life when Whitesnake and I were apart; but we had decided that we wanted to be with each other again at any cost.  It was complicated! We've been together now for ten years and it's the best decision I ever made.

Happy Birthday my love

xxxx


40 comments:

  1. The feelings are mutual babe xxxx

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  2. Hello KB!
    Such a beautiful and touching poem!
    Happy birthday to your husband!
    Have a great weekend!
    Dimi...

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  3. Beautiful poem, the prose is flowing. Happy birthday Whitesnake.

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  4. That is a very beautiful poem. Happy Birthday to your husband!

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  5. BTW: Is his birthday today? Is so we share the same birthday!

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  6. ...Happy Birthday Whitesnake!

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  7. Lovely poem to your hubby ~ Happy Anniversary ~ ^_^

    Happy Day to you,
    A ShutterBug Explores,
    aka (A Creative Harbor)

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  8. HI Vicki - his birthday was 24/11. Happy Birthday to you too x

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  9. Such a beautiful poem.
    Happy birthday Whitesnake.

    All the best Jan

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  10. This is sizzling.

    Happy birthday to your love.

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  11. So much passion and desire in this. A lovely verse, KB! :-)

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  12. A wonderful birthday poem. And it sounds like a happy ten years, too!

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  13. Hello, beautiful poem. Happy birthday to your love!

    Happy Sunday, enjoy your day. Have a great new week ahead!

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  14. yes, i love happy endings. :)

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  15. How romantic. Happy Birthday to your husband

    Much🖤love

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  16. What a hot poem... that passion is the best.

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  17. Lovely and romantic! Thank you for sharing the piece and the story behind it.

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  18. A beautifully written poem. Birthday wishes to Whitesnake.

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  19. A beautiful and sensual piece … tenderly sketched … brimming with love.

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  20. it is not always easy BUT it is always worth it!!

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  21. Beautiful love poem, KB. So vivid yet tenderly told. Makes me wanting for an inclusion, I'm sure Hubby loved it.
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  22. The forgetting of whose body is whose. Thanks for the reminder.

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  23. So beautiful...and sensual. But I'm baffled by the comment about cheating spouses. I think the blogger might be lost.
    Anyway, back to your poem...big thumbs up!

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  24. Hi Vivian, I've deleted the comments, just spam.

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  25. Sensuously beautiful KB! When one writes of a loved one, the poetry juices just flow smoothly.
    Happy birthday, Whitesnake!

    Hank

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  26. Whew! A very happy birthday to Whitesnake!

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  27. The kind of poem my husband would actually appreciate! :)

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  28. Reading this felt quite hurried (with eagerness) so it was good to read that it was true. Yes, it was quite a delightful poem.

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  29. Glad you have found happiness. Long may it continue.

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