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Monday, 21 February 2011

Microfiction Monday - Choices



I haven't written a Micro for a while. Hope you likey. Microfiction Monday is brought to us by the lovely Susan. Follow the link to join in the fun and games.





She releases the door handle, walking bravely down her chosen path. Footsteps echo, sweet promises made. Some doors should remain closed.


Have a great week.
See you tomorrow,
Love KB
xxx
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35 comments:

  1. Sylvia K21 February 2011 at 14:14

    Oh, great one for the day! I think that long, empty hallway whispered some of the same things to a lot of us! Hope you have a wonderful week!

    Sylvia

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  2. Diane21 February 2011 at 14:16

    I had similar thoughts this week. Glad you're back. :O)

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  3. Magdalen Islands21 February 2011 at 14:16

    I read it but I don't get it! What's a Microfiction?

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  4. Unknown21 February 2011 at 14:22

    Ooooh! I like! Great way to start out the meme!

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  5. Pat21 February 2011 at 14:26

    Oh, this long hallway is pregnant with symbolism. I really like your interpretation of it--keeping some doors closed as one moves on in life!

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  6. Maude Lynn21 February 2011 at 14:26

    This is excellent, KB!

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  7. Peggy21 February 2011 at 14:54

    keeping some of your past doors shut and locked works out the best.
    Liked what you saw in the picture.
    Have a great weel!

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  8. Michael G-G21 February 2011 at 15:14

    Great cadence to these lines! Enjoyed it a lot.

    Have a great week.

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  9. Marja21 February 2011 at 15:19

    Love it Good to keep some doors locked

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  10. Pooch21 February 2011 at 15:24

    Stark and beautiful.

    :)

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  11. Melanie Sherman21 February 2011 at 15:37

    Awesome. Made me want to find out more about her journey and what should be locked away. Good job.

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  12. Reflections21 February 2011 at 16:13

    Excellent choice of expression!

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  13. Susan Fobes21 February 2011 at 16:13

    Ooh, a mystery! I would read this!

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  14. Jim21 February 2011 at 17:37

    Uh oh, lets don't go there there! Some places should be off limits.
    Good (bad) thoughts, KB.
    ..

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  15. Rinkly Rimes21 February 2011 at 17:49

    I wonder if she'll change her mind halfway along!

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  16. SparkleFarkel21 February 2011 at 19:06

    Welcome "home"!

    "Some doors should remain closed," said KB's microfiction.

    Some windows, too, as I recall--> My Senior High English teacher use to always say, "Close the window or influenza." Nobody ever knew quite what the guy was trying to get at --and being that his exams were much like his one-liners, it's a miracle anyone ever passed his class. LOL!

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  17. Vicki21 February 2011 at 19:28

    Great post for this pic. Gave me a slight chill. Good job!

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  18. Priyanka Bhowmick21 February 2011 at 19:41

    should remain close to prevent ppl from heart fail.. good one!!

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  19. Gemma Wiseman21 February 2011 at 21:40

    Sweetness and warning walking hand in hand! A great take on the prompt!

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  20. Kethy H / ModaArchives21 February 2011 at 22:56

    Sweet and nice

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  21. Anonymous21 February 2011 at 23:17

    Great post! Love the imagery :O)

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  22. Ellen Brickley21 February 2011 at 23:25

    Nice entry, lots to think about!

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  23. Linda O'Connell22 February 2011 at 00:35

    Hi KB, Just found your blog and agree, some doors should remain closed. Please consider signing on as a follower on my blog and I will do the same. Can't wait tor ead more blonde ramblings :)
    http://lindaoconnell.blogspot.com/

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  24. izzy22 February 2011 at 01:16

    lotta doors to shut- thanks!

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  25. Anonymous22 February 2011 at 01:25

    welcome back to Microfiction. A good return!

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  26. G-Man22 February 2011 at 01:25

    KB...
    I Loved this story!!
    Deep and meaningful.

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  27. Ashling22 February 2011 at 01:40

    How very beautiful....poetry in prose!

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  28. Anyes22 February 2011 at 05:16

    Indeed the mystery remains when they are closed :-)

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  29. Jannie Funster22 February 2011 at 06:25

    Great micro! I wanna work up the courage to do one one day.

    xo

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  30. Grandma's Goulash22 February 2011 at 08:34

    Great MM. Love "some doors should remain closed", it gave me a bit of a chill.

    My MM: Escape

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  31. Ms.Daisy22 February 2011 at 09:13

    This one made me want to know where she is going...love the mystery here. Good one!

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  32. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}22 February 2011 at 09:42

    Welcome back KB, sometimes some doors should never be opened once they are closed. WOnderful Microfiction.

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  33. KB22 February 2011 at 13:26

    Thanks everyone.

    Wynn - we write a story about the pic in 140 characters or less. Follow the link on my post for more details :)

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  34. ruthinian23 February 2011 at 13:32

    very poetic. love it.

    RUTHI

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  35. Anonymous23 February 2011 at 14:08

    Ohh--now I wonder where she was going to go! Enjoyed this. Cheers~

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