twisting turmoil
emotions run amok
feelings laid out
like an open book
nowhere to run
nowhere to hide
some secrets should
remain inside
the prison consumes
time to break free
no-one to lean on
I must depend on me
the heart is willing
the time is now
a little faith
takes care of the how
Karen....
ReplyDeleteBeauty, Brains, Talent, and Great Cans!!
I think you are darned near perfect!!
Great job on the 55,Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End!!...G
Once again you have laid out and perfectly illustrated deep feelings that so many of us experience and can never fully describe. Thank you for sharing your feelings and your talent x
ReplyDeleteAmen, sistah!
ReplyDeletePleasure to have read you!
Have a great day!
That is perfect exposition of how one feels when one is on the edge and bout to take a plunge!
ReplyDeleteGreat 55ve Karen
pretty good advice, poetically offered.
ReplyDeleteWhat an insightful 55 word poem! Wonderful. :)
ReplyDeleteGood, good, good, Krazy! Like this and like its title. Makes me want to write some poetry, too. D
ReplyDeleteYou managed to say so much even with rhyme! Great job!
ReplyDeleteWell written. I enjoyed my visit. BJ
ReplyDeleteThis is so full of emotion. And it rhymes!
ReplyDeletenice bit of verse...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments, I'll swing by and visit you all when I can.
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