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Thursday, 2 July 2009

FLASH 55 - TWO FOR THE PRICE OF ONE

KB's 55


Lazy or hardworking,
depends on the day.
Brave when it counts,
too timid to say.


Keeping secrets,
opening up.
Outwardly humorous,
tears inside well up.


Trusting and believing,
watching my back.
Unflappable in an emergency,
normality brings panic attack.


Aggressively protective,
meekly letting things slide.
Who will I be today...
Dr Jekyll or Mr Hyde?


Hubby's 55

Conflicting emotions
Hidden, trapped for years
Surfacing unwanted, unbidden.
The Stranger within.

Jealousy, anger, frustration, regret.
Heated words, raised voices.
Illogical thoughts.
The Stranger within.

Self doubt, fear of the unknown.
Swirling, destructive negativity.
Rising ire.
The Stranger within.

Disenchanted loved ones, the consequence,
of faulty reasoning.
Loneliness the unavoidable result -
A Stranger without.

Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -

G-MAN If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.


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  1. NR2 July 2009 at 20:33

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  2. NR2 July 2009 at 20:34

    That was nice...nice post!!!

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  3. KB2 July 2009 at 22:00

    I preferred the first comment Nazish...it made me laugh.

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  4. NR3 July 2009 at 00:45

    lols....wonder that first comment would have made any sense!!

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  5. buffalodick3 July 2009 at 02:58

    A lot of folks enjoy in this writing exercise..I read them, but have not participated- yet!

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  6. G-Man3 July 2009 at 14:02

    Karen...
    I really envy what you and your hubby have...

    I loved BOTH of your 55's.

    Sort of an 'inner struggle' theme going on for the both of you I see.
    Excellent writing going on in Kiwi Land.
    Thank you so much for adding a bit of brilliance and class, to 'our' little Friday Funfest...Galen

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  7. CJ3 July 2009 at 19:27

    I enjoyed both poems, but I especially liked the Dr. J & Mr. H. at the end of the first one.

    I wrote my first 55 today. Vome visit:
    http://proartz.blogspot.com/2009/07/chazs-big-surprise-friday-flash-55.html

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  8. anthonynorth3 July 2009 at 19:51

    Two excellent 55s. I sometimes wonder if I'm Jekyll or Hyde on any particular day - in a nice sort of way, of course.

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  9. Hootin Anni4 July 2009 at 00:53

    Wow....two for the price of one. That's what I call a bargain.

    Great works, from both of you.

    Mine's posted

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  10. Head Cookie4 July 2009 at 04:39

    Great 55's by the both of you. I hope you have a great weekend. My 55 is up.

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  11. Fandango4 July 2009 at 05:07

    You humans , both of you, so full of negative thoughts. How did we ever lose t6he dragon wars to you ?

    Two great 55's

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  12. Dr.John4 July 2009 at 07:23

    Now that's wonderful to see wife and husband doing something together. Loved it

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  13. KB4 July 2009 at 14:03

    Nazish - It didn't...that's why I liked it.

    Buff - I wish you would.

    Missy - I'll wait to hear from you in your own time. You and your son are in my thoughts.

    G - Thanks so much for stopping by and appreciating us.

    CJ - I will be by to visit you soon.

    Ant - I think many people do.

    Jadey - Thanks. Happy weekend to you too.

    Dragons - Pn my way soon.

    Dr John - I loved your husband and wife team story too.

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