SHE LOVED WITH A LOVE THAT WAS MORE THAN LOVE,
Why did she feel so alone?
She loved the feeling of being in love,
But barely recognised herself when she came home.
She loved with a love that was more than love,
Why did she feel so afraid?
Conflicting emotions inside of her,
Was jealousy the price lovers paid?
She loved with a love that was more than love,
Was this suspicion and anger she felt?
But when she looked into his eyes,
Her heart would truely melt.
She loved with a love that was more than love,
The rollercoaster taking it's toll,
Exhilarating highs, plunging lows,
She'd never felt so out of control.
They loved with a love that was more than love,
Their hearts and souls entwined,
Together they took a leap of faith,
Left the negetive world behind.
Ah, thanks hun,
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Karen, this is simply beautiful.
ReplyDeleteU write very well, i wish i could..lol!!!
ReplyDeletetake care!!
Awesome, my love. That is super writing.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing. Makes you think as all great writing does.
ReplyDeleteKeith - Thank you so much.
ReplyDeleteNazih - You write very well too.
Hubby - So happy you liked it xx
Dr JOhn - You are too kind.
Nazish - Whoops, spelt your name wrong AGAIN! Perhaps I should just call you Naz or something like that. What would you prefer?
ReplyDeleteTrue love can overcome all adversity - you seem to have found it.
ReplyDeleteStan - Very true.
ReplyDeleteLovers leap!!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful writing My Dear...
Would that we could feel that way all the time!
ReplyDeleteYou are a talented poet. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone.
ReplyDeleteKB, this excellent and very moving. Your use of repetition is very powerful.....
ReplyDeletelove-Melanie-bd
beautiful, sweet easy to read like it a lot
ReplyDeletelol...whatever u r comfortable with!!! Naz is fine :)!!!
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