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Monday, 24 August 2009

CARRY ON TUESDAY #15

SHE LOVED WITH A LOVE THAT WAS MORE THAN LOVE,
Why did she feel so alone?
She loved the feeling of being in love,
But barely recognised herself when she came home.

She loved with a love that was more than love,
Why did she feel so afraid?
Conflicting emotions inside of her,
Was jealousy the price lovers paid?

She loved with a love that was more than love,
Was this suspicion and anger she felt?
But when she looked into his eyes,
Her heart would truely melt.

She loved with a love that was more than love,
The rollercoaster taking it's toll,
Exhilarating highs, plunging lows,
She'd never felt so out of control.

They loved with a love that was more than love,
Their hearts and souls entwined,
Together they took a leap of faith,
Left the negetive world behind.

20 comments:

Missy said...

Karen you my dear sweet friend who I adore are so very talent!!! I love the passion of your writes and the bits and pieces you share with us.

xxxxxx

KB said...

Ah, thanks hun,

xxxxxxxx

Anonymous said...

Karen, this is simply beautiful.

Nazish Rahman said...

U write very well, i wish i could..lol!!!

take care!!

Clark said...

Awesome, my love. That is super writing.

Dr.John said...

Great writing. Makes you think as all great writing does.

KB said...

Keith - Thank you so much.

Nazih - You write very well too.

Hubby - So happy you liked it xx

Dr JOhn - You are too kind.

KB said...

Nazish - Whoops, spelt your name wrong AGAIN! Perhaps I should just call you Naz or something like that. What would you prefer?

Stan Ski said...

True love can overcome all adversity - you seem to have found it.

KB said...

Stan - Very true.

G-Man said...

Lovers leap!!!
Wonderful writing My Dear...

buffalodick said...

Would that we could feel that way all the time!

aspiemom said...

You are a talented poet. Well done!

KB said...

Thanks everyone.

Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

KB, this excellent and very moving. Your use of repetition is very powerful.....



love-Melanie-bd

Old Grizz said...

beautiful, sweet easy to read like it a lot

Nazish Rahman said...

lol...whatever u r comfortable with!!! Naz is fine :)!!!

take care

KB said...

Thank you all for stopping by.

Jenni B. said...

Hello! We invite you to contribute to our new poetry blog: objects of imitation

KB said...

Thanks.

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