Hubby's 55 - Los Angeles Airport
This Flash 55 is a follow on from last week's wee effort. I'm taking Eaton's advice.
The Air States AX370 crew arrived at the briefing office ten minutes ahead of schedule. They had already heard about tropical cyclone “Felicia” from the inbound crew. A high intensity storm, the epicenter lay 740nm ENE of Oahu, 140nm north of the Tropic of Cancer.
“Hmm, ‘Fellatio’, the big blow" mused the First Officer aloud.
KB's 55
His mind is full of the memory of her. The pounding of her heart as he rests his head on her breast, her intoxicating scent beneath sweet perfume and silky skin welcoming his fingertips.
"I'll return at nightfall my love," she whispers.
His restlessness increases as he awaits sunset.
Being a vampire in love sucks!
Flash Fiction - Each Friday, I (and sometimes hubby) compose a short story of 55 words - no more, no less. If you would like to join in the fun and games... post your story and report to the boss -
G-MAN
If you're not interested in contributing a story, feel free to read the other entries. I'm sure any comments you have would be appreciated.
Happy reading and writing!
Love KB
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Both very good, in very different ways!
ReplyDeleteNice...so when r u planning to publish them in your book...lol!!
ReplyDeleteLove that tone switch in the vampire-in-love's last line! ROFL, beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYou both got this Oral thing going on today eh?
ReplyDeleteVery Juicy 55's!!
Thank You both for these marvelous contributions.
Have a Wonderful Week-End...G
Just visiting to read your both great 55's I love your vampire end'
ReplyDeleteKB
Love the vampire twist and other play on words. Clever and fun.
ReplyDeleteYou can read mine here.
Have a great weekend.
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ReplyDeleteLOVE the vampire 55!!!
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is posted here. Have a super weekend. See you next week, I hope.
Loved the surprise ending." Love sucks"- Funny
ReplyDeletemy 55 is posted
HERE.
The big blow what a hoot. Great 55's KB your 55 I can't wait to read more of gotta love a vampire in love. TGIF mine are up too
ReplyDeleteloved them both. but ugh hurricanes and such are not fun. hey, i had a vampire 55 once when i was slightly obsessed w twilight for a short time lol great job to both you and your hubs! :) i'm up as well.
ReplyDeleteLol! Now I am wondering what would be a female name rhyming with cunnilingus!
ReplyDeleteHope I didn't offend you with the joke, I thought you'd laugh...
ReplyDeleteThanks for all your comments.
ReplyDeleteBuff - loved the joke!