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Monday 24 August 2009

CARRY ON TUESDAY #15

SHE LOVED WITH A LOVE THAT WAS MORE THAN LOVE,
Why did she feel so alone?
She loved the feeling of being in love,
But barely recognised herself when she came home.

She loved with a love that was more than love,
Why did she feel so afraid?
Conflicting emotions inside of her,
Was jealousy the price lovers paid?

She loved with a love that was more than love,
Was this suspicion and anger she felt?
But when she looked into his eyes,
Her heart would truely melt.

She loved with a love that was more than love,
The rollercoaster taking it's toll,
Exhilarating highs, plunging lows,
She'd never felt so out of control.

They loved with a love that was more than love,
Their hearts and souls entwined,
Together they took a leap of faith,
Left the negetive world behind.

19 comments:

  1. Karen, this is simply beautiful.

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  2. U write very well, i wish i could..lol!!!

    take care!!

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  3. Awesome, my love. That is super writing.

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  4. Great writing. Makes you think as all great writing does.

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  5. Keith - Thank you so much.

    Nazih - You write very well too.

    Hubby - So happy you liked it xx

    Dr JOhn - You are too kind.

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  6. Nazish - Whoops, spelt your name wrong AGAIN! Perhaps I should just call you Naz or something like that. What would you prefer?

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  7. True love can overcome all adversity - you seem to have found it.

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  8. Lovers leap!!!
    Wonderful writing My Dear...

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  9. Would that we could feel that way all the time!

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  10. You are a talented poet. Well done!

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  11. KB, this excellent and very moving. Your use of repetition is very powerful.....



    love-Melanie-bd

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  12. beautiful, sweet easy to read like it a lot

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  13. lol...whatever u r comfortable with!!! Naz is fine :)!!!

    take care

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  14. Thank you all for stopping by.

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  15. Hello! We invite you to contribute to our new poetry blog: objects of imitation

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