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Friday, 25 March 2011

Don't Mess With Me



Each Friday I write a short story in exactly 55 words. Atually, I haven't written a 55 for a while. Thanks for the reminder G. If you'd like to join in the fun and games, write your story, visit G-Man and let him know you've posted.




Every day was the same. She waited alone, after school, at the bus stop.

'Hey, big nose.'

The girls poked and taunted her. She couldn't take it anymore. She strode proudly onto the bus, sat next to the ring leader and whispered in her ear.

'Bring it on. I'm ready.'

They never bothered her again.





Have a great weekend all. See you tomorrow for Simply Delish.

Love KB
xxx
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23 comments:

  1. Whitesnake25 March 2011 at 10:43

    Blessed are the big nose's for they shall inhale more air.....

    You haven't got a big nose...but you do have a big heart!
    xxxx

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  2. betty-NZ25 March 2011 at 11:43

    Awesome story!!

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  3. JJ25 March 2011 at 12:45

    Great story. I might have to give this a try!

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  4. Jannie Funster25 March 2011 at 13:25

    Okay, WHAT exactly did she say?? Did it allude to or come right out and include something about ass-whooping? I hope so.

    xoxo

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  5. Anonymous25 March 2011 at 13:39

    Bullies are such cowards. Great 55.

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  6. Unknown25 March 2011 at 13:47

    Agree with AA on this one. Good for her. I can so relate in the shnoz department and kids can be brutal.

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  7. lime25 March 2011 at 13:54

    ah yes, calling a bully's bluff can sometimes work wonders. ;)

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  8. Brian Miller25 March 2011 at 14:03

    oh yeah, give them a taste of their own medicine...

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  9. G-Man25 March 2011 at 14:32

    Did she threaten to blow a GIGANTIC loogie on them?
    Karen, Trust me you are missed on Friday's, you have been playing as long as I have!
    Your 55's are always great reading.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  10. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall25 March 2011 at 15:55

    what an inspirational 55.
    Bully is rude.
    Glad for what you did.
    Bless you.

    Happy Friday.

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  11. moondustwriter25 March 2011 at 17:48

    Go baby!

    I agree with WS - big heart
    Have missed you sweetie
    Hugs

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  12. RNSANE25 March 2011 at 18:31

    That's all it took? Right on!

    Mine is at:

    http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/03/friday-flash-55-rest-in-peace-elizabeth.html

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  13. anthonynorth25 March 2011 at 20:41

    That's how to stop them. Stand up to them and they don't like it.

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  14. Belinda Munoz25 March 2011 at 22:57

    Nice! Courage like that isn't found in bullies. Loved your 55.

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  15. sheila25 March 2011 at 23:02

    Ah, a line I heard more than a few times at school. Brings back memories.:o(

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  16. Olivia25 March 2011 at 23:56

    LOlss
    A well said- Bring it On..huh!!

    Serves them right!
    Repeat exactly what they say standing upright.. The coward bullies will disappear..

    Love xx

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  17. izzy26 March 2011 at 01:44

    Oh yeah- bring it on is right!
    it has been that sort of week...
    Thanks.

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  18. amf26 March 2011 at 02:55

    rock on, power to the brave...great 55!

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  19. Magdalen Islands26 March 2011 at 03:34

    I enjoyed your flash 55. I never got into doing them myself. Have a good weekend.

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  20. Maude Lynn26 March 2011 at 05:02

    Good for her! I love this one, KB!

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  21. Monkey Man26 March 2011 at 09:24

    Nicely done. Perfect way to handle a bully.

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  22. PattiKen26 March 2011 at 16:03

    Good for her. Bullies need a good talking to, and it sounds like she chose just the right words.

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  23. Enchanted Oak26 March 2011 at 17:58

    You made me smile. Answer cruelty with courage. It drives the idiots crazy.

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