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Wednesday 2 March 2011

Poetry: Our Escape









Escape with me to the Bay
Hand in hand, we'll walk all day
Watch the seagulls fly up above
Do they realise, we're in love?



Escape with me to the sand
Side by side, explore this land
Children playing, push and shove
Will they grow and find true love?



Escape with me to our room
The day is over, far too soon
See the strangers passing by
Do they know inside lovers lie?



Escape with me in life
Through good times and strife
Everything we've been through
I'll never stop loving you






Be kind to each other.
Love KB
xxx

16 comments:

  1. Very sweet poem! really made me smile :)

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  2. beautiful words, got a tear in my eye
    Denise

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  3. smiles...love going to the beach....it is certainly a romantic place...and glad you have that love...

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  4. I like the lines about children playing and wondering if they will find true love. I have wondered that about my own children. This was sweet :)

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  5. Wise words - nice one shot KB.

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  6. Very sweet and romantic, KB. Nothing like an escape to the shore with the one you love.

    Thanks for coming by my place.

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  7. Beautiful.

    All the shoving in childhood - hopefully leads to an understanding of how to not shove.

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  8. awww...we need those escapes...romantic write..

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  9. Lovely tribute to life and to the one you love...beautiful...bkm

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  10. Awww... how sweet and romantic is that!! Loved the simplicity of the words and the heart that went into writing this poem...
    Makes me wanna run away to some bay with my hubby RIGHT NOW!!

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  11. I enjoyed reading this one so much.. very soft and beautiful.


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  12. Well lookyhere...a good old-fashioned love poem! And well written! My heart soars...jams it's feet into sand, never lets go of my lover's hand...

    I like the point of view too...like looking out and away.

    Lovely

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  13. Thanks everyone. Glad you enjoyed it.

    WS - love you too babe xxxx

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  14. Pleasant and ably-stated/-versed. Made me smile. =) (See?)

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