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Wednesday, 2 March 2011

Poetry: Our Escape









Escape with me to the Bay
Hand in hand, we'll walk all day
Watch the seagulls fly up above
Do they realise, we're in love?



Escape with me to the sand
Side by side, explore this land
Children playing, push and shove
Will they grow and find true love?



Escape with me to our room
The day is over, far too soon
See the strangers passing by
Do they know inside lovers lie?



Escape with me in life
Through good times and strife
Everything we've been through
I'll never stop loving you






Be kind to each other.
Love KB
xxx
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16 comments:

  1. anthonynorth2 March 2011 at 11:18

    Lovely words.

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  2. Unknown2 March 2011 at 11:41

    Very sweet poem! really made me smile :)

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  3. Denise2 March 2011 at 11:59

    beautiful words, got a tear in my eye
    Denise

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  4. Brian Miller2 March 2011 at 13:01

    smiles...love going to the beach....it is certainly a romantic place...and glad you have that love...

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  5. Unknown2 March 2011 at 15:08

    I like the lines about children playing and wondering if they will find true love. I have wondered that about my own children. This was sweet :)

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  6. Brother Ollie2 March 2011 at 15:11

    Wise words - nice one shot KB.

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  7. PattiKen2 March 2011 at 16:46

    Very sweet and romantic, KB. Nothing like an escape to the shore with the one you love.

    Thanks for coming by my place.

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  8. Anonymous2 March 2011 at 17:34

    Beautiful.

    All the shoving in childhood - hopefully leads to an understanding of how to not shove.

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  9. Claudia2 March 2011 at 19:04

    awww...we need those escapes...romantic write..

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  10. signed...bkm2 March 2011 at 19:40

    Lovely tribute to life and to the one you love...beautiful...bkm

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  11. Whitesnake3 March 2011 at 08:46

    I love you too Babe XXXX

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  12. Anonymous3 March 2011 at 10:20

    Awww... how sweet and romantic is that!! Loved the simplicity of the words and the heart that went into writing this poem...
    Makes me wanna run away to some bay with my hubby RIGHT NOW!!

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  13. Shashidhar Sharma3 March 2011 at 21:10

    I enjoyed reading this one so much.. very soft and beautiful.


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  14. kolembo6 March 2011 at 20:00

    Well lookyhere...a good old-fashioned love poem! And well written! My heart soars...jams it's feet into sand, never lets go of my lover's hand...

    I like the point of view too...like looking out and away.

    Lovely

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  15. KB6 March 2011 at 20:09

    Thanks everyone. Glad you enjoyed it.

    WS - love you too babe xxxx

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  16. Steve Isaak9 March 2011 at 10:50

    Pleasant and ably-stated/-versed. Made me smile. =) (See?)

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