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Wednesday, 10 November 2010

The Other Side

Here's my contribution to One Shot.








Two sides
to every story
One party
strives for glory

Emotional blackmail
confuses the heart
Constant control
keeps you apart

Deceit and lies
become the heroes
Empathy and love
totaling zero

The battle is short
one side victorious
But life is long
people are curious

Another scenario
begins to unfold
The true story
finally told


My darlin' Whitesnake's One Shot is here

Have a great day/night
Love KB
xxx

   
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16 comments:

  1. Whitesnake10 November 2010 at 10:01

    I LOVE IT!
    But of course I would aye!
    XXXX

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  2. Brian Miller10 November 2010 at 12:22

    you know...no one ever really winner when sides are taken, unless of course you are on each others sides...smiles. nice one shot!

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  3. PattiKen10 November 2010 at 12:28

    Ah, the story behind the story. This probably describes many a failed marriage. Very nice, KB.

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  4. anthonynorth10 November 2010 at 12:42

    As soon as there are sides, the descent begins.
    Nice one.

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  5. moondustwriter10 November 2010 at 13:27

    Every one has to sling mud. Very descriptive of relationships KB

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Moonie Smiles

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  6. Anonymous10 November 2010 at 14:06

    There are the stories - but sooner or later the truth will out... Nice one shot

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  7. Anonymous10 November 2010 at 14:43

    all ending with the truth...good one.

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  8. G-Man10 November 2010 at 16:14

    Karen...
    Loved your poem My Dear...
    Great One Shot...G

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  9. wanderer and vagabond10 November 2010 at 19:19

    each group of line could build a scene spectacular in there own way...amazing KB.

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  10. Steve Isaak10 November 2010 at 23:30

    Relatable, punchy-short lines.

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  11. Bubba11 November 2010 at 06:30

    The truth usually lies between the two sides. Nice One Shot, KB!

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  12. Emmanuel Ibok11 November 2010 at 13:51

    As true as the truth that finally be told...nicely written.

    Cheers!

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  13. June_Butterfly11 November 2010 at 14:32

    Very true.Always two sides of a story.Sometimes truth unfolds ,sometimes it doesn't.But the story never ends till the story is completely told.

    Awesome one shot!

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  14. Shashidhar Sharma11 November 2010 at 22:48

    I enjoyed it so much.. one each others side... reading both of your poetry one after another, makes me smile.. I could see the dialogue going...
    thanks for sharing..


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  15. Marshy12 November 2010 at 02:49

    i do enjoy also reading these one after the other.....do you write these deliberately to play off each other or is that just the way it happens? enjoyed this..cheers pete

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  16. KB14 November 2010 at 15:22

    Thanks Mr Snake xxxx

    Thanks everyone.

    Pete - it's just the way it happens.

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