Here's my contribution to Carry On Tuesday....visit Me Keith to join in the fun and games. I've also entered this into Potery Potluck (which I'm way too late for) and One Shot (which I'm way too early for). I don't usually do the triple entry post kinda thing but I wanted to get organised and save a bit of time so I can spend the next couple of days with my darlin' Whitesnake.
The course of true love
never did run smooth
In the early days,
Mum never approved
Married young,
did what was expected
Left me worn out
and feeling neglected
Older and wiser,
second time around
My course is complete,
true love I have found.
I'll be back later with an update on my progress on 30 days to a happier, healthier me. Until then...hope you're all as lucky in love as we are.
Whitesnake's C.O.T is here and his One Shot is here
Love KB
xxx
Awwwww, good for you - both! I do love a happy ending! :o)
ReplyDeleteGood poem, second time around always seems to be the best time around.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem! Enjoy your days with your true love ;-)
ReplyDeleteNice! Everything is for learning.
ReplyDeleteGood message!
Glad you found your happily ever after. True love when found is the greatest. Glad you found your true love.
ReplyDeleteI hear this all the time! I'm glad the second time around was different :)
ReplyDeleteHow sweet it is. As soon as mr. Whitesnake gives me a few lessons I'm going to look for a girl like you. Of course I'll need a note from my wife...
ReplyDeleteThat's the way I did it, too -- and I must say I made a much better choice this time!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone.
ReplyDeleteGS - he's a lucky guy isn't he?
Missy - woot, woot :)
How sweeeeeet! A tear is running down my cheek - actually it could have something to do with the onions I'm peeling.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet indeed. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeletelove the ending,
ReplyDeletesuper profound and well rounded piece.
Thanks for contributing to potluck poetry.
Happy Tuesday!
A+
simple and well said! mine's here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
ReplyDeleteAnd my love I got 3rd time lucky my princess xxxx
ReplyDeleteA simple, sweet poem. Good job.
ReplyDeletethank goodness for second shots...smiles.
ReplyDeleteso good to get another chance..i'm happy for you and look VERY happy on the pic.. :=)
ReplyDeleteNice One Shot, Keith.
ReplyDeleteGood luck on your 30 days.
Keith - yeah right, I know you're a big softie.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sender, Jingle, 5 loaf, poemblae, Brian, Claudia and Erica (hehe-where did you get Keith from?)
WS - we are both very lucky this time around xxxx
Took me the third time round to find that love....I guess I just needed some maturity.
ReplyDeleteWas the same for my man.
ReplyDeletehave a lovely day.
ReplyDeleteAward/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!
see you on week 14...
Aww... you learned it the hard way, alright... but you learned it, and you earned your "reward"...that's the main thing!!!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, KB... And I hope you enjoy a beautiful life with your beloved whitesnake :)
A very sweet One Shot!
xoxoxo
Aww, thanks.
ReplyDeleteDirect, sweet, guaranteed-to-get-laid-by-your-sweetie work.
ReplyDeleteWisdom gained and properly applied. Lovely to be happy!
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